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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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It’s a hood night
Holding my pen tight
In the glow of a nightlight
Waiting for something
To jump out for me to write
In the closet or under the bed
Surrounded by pain colored
Red and a whiff of dead
Don’t feel a thing though
Using my brain to close
The punctured vein
No time to do it for the vine
Nothing pickles like brine
Sweet seawater
A tall glass to order
Reminding me to remember
Peeking out from my
Whereabouts
I’m sober now
The photos tell me
I once was young
My mind seems to be blind
To that fact
Looking back is a trap
To many times
I’ve heard the snap
Forgot to unpack
Now is all I got
Later is not found
On the map


 

 

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tretre says:

WOW!..I Hope you don't mind me sharing this one...This poem was deep. I have a few people who should read this, So I hope you don't mind me sharing this one...Always keep that pen movin Wize Dom!
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2b2b2 says:

OUTSTANDING
 

scash102 says:

well written and very expressive, I enjoyed it.

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