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This Time: (Second Chances)

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 This time it will be different,

This time I will be persistent.

This time I will not be afraid of commitment,

This time I will be considerate,

This time I will make it my mission to listen.

This time I want it all.......

This time I will be there when you fall........

This time I will give you more,

This time I wont be so quick to run out the door.

This time I ask for your forgiveness thats all I ask for,

This time your feelings I'm willing to explore.

This time I will take the chance and give you my heart,

pouring out my emotions, asking you for a new start.

This time I wont let this moment slip away,

This time I will try to make a way, meeting you every 

inch of the way, and not halfway.

I realize what I had, now my feelings are twisted on the

inside, now I'm feeling sad, Wishing I would have treasured what I had.

I realize I'm in love with you, what more can

I say, accept I miss you each and everyday,

This time I hope you consider what I say,

I'm opening up to you, No more feelings locked way.

 

 

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Contest Winner  

The Immortal Wize says:

Thank God for those chances, this is a timepiece.

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tretre says:

Thank you Wize Dom! I believe in second chances...If not then god wouldn't give second chances...for some us more then second chances. Always keep that pen movin Wize Dom!
 

darylg44 says:

A second chance. A final commitment. A soul scrapped raw. Beautifully scripted tretre. Felt every word of this

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