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Love First and Love Lasts

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One Time Love

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first love

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My One Time Love

My Ticket to Happiness

Reasoned as living, feeling alive

In truth you lied, where memories reside

Sunny daze, running thru a love crazy maze

Phased as forever, but really periodic

Episodes in happiness, my world stood fulfilled

Building mental time machines, to take me back still

When I couldn’t lose, loving beginning in all consuming

Thrown back to old school, imagining what passed on

Analyzing or re-editing our fateful ending, in do-overs

Being more attentive, or just clutching more tightly

You were just a one time love, but now I love you more often?

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COMMENTS

 

LP45 says:

Sounds like "the one that got away" kind of poem. Nice work.
 

SoFloetic says:

Great write
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2b2b2 says:

Thank you kindly ladies....ONE
 

scash102 says:

Very nice
 

thewriterv says:

Great Poem. Life is a circle of time.

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thewriterv says:

Great Poem. Life is a circle of time.
 

thewriterv says:

Great Poem. Life is a circle of time.
 

thewriterv says:

Great Poem. Life is a circle of time.
 

thewriterv says:

What's in the future for all your poetry? Do you plan to release a book?

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