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Love First and Love Lasts

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Love Done Left Here

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Pick up your things and walk out the door

Better yet I’ll leave, never to return evermore

Love done left here,

Love done left here for good

Communication is cut off from not paying to listen

The reasons why we are here are for seasons gone

Pleasure has left because our Love was Never Live

Hanging on to threads, kept in a closed sewing box

Professing need a little to late to straighten the situation

Keeping Up with them Jonses instead of caring for home

Gold-Digging for Stature to Imaginary Capture Content

Love done left here,

Love done left here for good

Happy days return when your face is far gone

Not looking to destroy, but build back up again

There are no fingers to point without fingers being turned in

Inside the right thing was wrong without a yearly heart checkup

You feint a love, but it is based on mind, which is only neck up

Where is the hearts that pump in and out automatically?

Where is the hand that connects to arms lovingly caressing us?

We are two trains of thought travelling in different directions

Me uptown and you downtown, you express while I ride local

Love done left here,

Love done left here for good

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LP45 says:

OMG! Now this is realllly good! "There are no fingers to point without fingers being turned in." Truth be told! I have no more words. (raised fist, clapping hands). Wow.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Rolls Royce Love don't live here anymore sometimes for peace of mind, its not always cheaper to keep her

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2b2b2 says:

Thanks ladypoet45....ONE
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2b2b2 says:

WOW....Great Call mrmelody7, hadn't realize the similarities to Rolls Royce Love doesn't live here anymore.....Great Album....thanks sir!
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tretre says:

Love this poem 2b2b2! You have a unique style when it comes to expressing your thoughts, which I find amazing. Sometimes you have to let someone go to find that deep need of peace. Beautifully written. Always keep that pen movin 2b2b2!!!
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks tretre....ONE
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Charles2 says:

love ain't happening unless it gives you reason . If you have reason, it often not reason enough, if it ever was. still, love is reason enough if you make it happen. sometimes its just not worth it. love your take on the back and forth between finding out you've lost it.

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2b2b2 says:

Love the way you broke it down...thanks
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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