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Back To The Concrete Jungle

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Everyday just a case of survival while political system tries

its best to divide us

Struggling just to make ends meet, to us no surprise the 

powers to be wish to see our demise

With resilence a part of our very being, the system is astonished

by what they are seeing, our heads are not down, we are still around

, we are still smiling, we are still styling, yeah we are still living

amongst the killing, stealing and the drugs

while all the do gooders are running to the suburbs

With all their might the system tries to hold us back, just

part of being Black is our answer to their demeaning solutions

they bring to all our new generations

Back to the concrete jungle, living life through the hunger

through all the lightning and thunder

Politicians, do gooders, just remember what you see

is what you get and you aint seen nothing yet

Back to the concrete jungle, one last thing polticians coming

your way, we are here to stay

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scash102 says:

I really liked this poem and agree with it as well.

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you very much for your early morning comment

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mrmelody7 says:

Like your message about world full of fake people
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2b2b2 says:

Well Played.....ONE
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you 2b2bsure
 

Tali says:

I love this poem, very deep!

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you Sweet T, from my observations growing up and livin in the inner city

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tiffanyr says:

Wow I visioned every word its true how the world is .

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you I write from visualization and experience. I go out experience life and at some point in time write about it

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tiffanyr says:

Your welcome you comment on my poems so why I come and give ur poem an awesome comment. I love writing poems to give my readers an image through words from the hood or basic life experiences. Sometimes I'm like wow I wrote this lol!
 

mrmelody7 says:

Well I do the same, I am a one and done poet, once I write it I rarely read them again but sometime I will read one and say the same thing I wrote this?
 

love_supreme says:

This is an excellent write.

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank U latin_lover love the folks in the Urban cities will always call my old neighborhood my home

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