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LP45
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lightness in the dark
Hey there my fellow poets! Blessings and greetings to you all for a prosperous new year. Life has been pretty rough for me since I last posted but nonetheless, as always with God's mercy and grace I've persevered. I'm finally at a point where I can start posting again. I so miss being on here and reading everyone's works. I hope that everything is going well for everyone. Let's keep the inklove flowing!

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Heart, You Did It!

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romance

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Heart, you did it!
You didn't fall for it this time.
You stayed strong throughout
Closing every sorryline
He could think of!
Gin! The player becomes the played
He never saw my ace of spades
That strong mind given to me by
My elders and teachers of past mistakes
He couldn't see my King of hearts
Who gave his Queen of diamonds
The insight and wisdom to not let herself
Be played by that ole' joker
I do my best to do what's right
All this baby this and baby girl that
Let it all take flight!
Get yourself together first my brother
Don't just scratch the surface, dig deep!
In order for one to get to the top
You gotta start at the bottom with your feet.
So plant yourself, humble yourself,
But most of all respect yourself
And if you choose to come back this way
You'll have a better understanding
Of what's appropriate to say
To me or whomever else you decide to speak to
Life and love become much easier
When you attract the right one who seeks you
Not just for who you are but what she
Envisions what the two of you can be.
This by far isn't criticism in any way
We all need a check every now and again
When we grow together as a people
We stand a better chance at winning
The reward in the end.
You go, heart!

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COMMENTS

 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
 

LP45 says:

Thank you latin lover. I appreciate your support.
 

QUEEN ARMANDA says:

very true, wow the power in saying no to protect your heart is deep. but, in order to prevent a heart attack you have to have a healthy heart beauty in this work of art i am so glad you said no to protect your heart.
 

LP45 says:

Yes, love can be both our blessing and or our demise. A healthy loving heart is always best. Thank you Queen for reading and for your support. Peace and blessings.

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