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Through The Eyes Of A Child:

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 Close your eyes and go back for a while,

to a place in time when you were a child;

Remember the world seemed such a big place to be,

how you longed to explore all its riches to see;

Remember those warm spring days when flowers would bloom,

all those nights you would count the stars from your room;

Remember those long summer days that were so hot,

how you longed to run to the river to swim in a cool spot;

Remember all the leaves with their golden colors in the fall,

how in your  mind's ete tiy narveked at it all;

Remember those cold winter nights, how beautiful the snowflakes

would look from the street lights,

how you would wake in the morning to a world covered in white;

Remember when mom and dad would take you to the christmas play,

how you were so fascinated of the baby jesus born that day;

Remember the stories of how he grew to be a Godly man,

how they crucified him you asked Mom why, she replies "Child it's part of 

God's plan";

Now open your eyes and you might look around and say,

I'm not so very different than I was in those days;

Remember when times get rough for a while,

close your eyes and thing back you're still God's child.

 

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tretre says:

Sorry for the mess up guys somewhere in the middle... :)
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igotastory says:

This poem is so beautiful

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2b2b2 says:

Magnificent Share and Reminder.....ONE
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tretre says:

Thank you Igotastory....Thank you for showin love. I'm glad you liked it. Always keep that pen movin!
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tretre says:

Thank you 2b2b2! A reminder is what I was going for. Always keep that pen movin!
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The Immortal Wize says:

This is such a memory, very beautiful and touching.

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jcf108 says:

You are.a very visual poet, I found myself immersed in my own childhood as I was reading it. Ironic I would see this today for I was feeling bored and decided to lay in the sun for a while as I did often as a child and it was so renewing. I like your rhyme and rhythm too.

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