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TSALAS
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Venom

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romance

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 Balance, its whats missing..silence is all i seek.. A break from this emotional roller coaster that is supposed to be defined as peace. I preach, i pray, i plead..but the venom is just so sweet. Its enticing, so I decide to leech. i save you by sucking it into my own veins, but how many times do we have to repeat this game , its disgusting, its nothing, its all full of pain..I wanted you to love me back, but you see i didn't understand, that yu only know how to love you. Now it feels as if im a queen,but only of the damned. 

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2b2b2 says:

TIGHT.....Very Well Crafted.....BRAVO!! (in fact STANDING OVATION)
 

odonko-ba says:

Ditto! "I save you by sucking it into my own veins'' Very clever and descriptive. Explosive visuals. Keep writing. Never put down the Quill.

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igotastory says:

Great poem I love it

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The Immortal Wize says:

Yeah!!! this is the ish on the dish, I love how you put this together.

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Tsalas says:

Thank you! <3

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write

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