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New Car Smell

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Mmm, how beautiful?!

No dings, no scars,

no dents, with the smell

of a brand new car.

I can't wait to whip that,

even if it's just for the day,

even if it's just a test drive,

even if it's just for play.

How many miles does it have,

and how often should I wax it?

Very often I hope,

and I hope there's no plastic.

There's no need for any work,

she runs with no problems,

and if there is then I'm sure

that I can simply solve them.

It should be an easy fix

since she's not that old.

I can tell from the smell

...(sniff)... ah... sold...

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OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY sonofsun5211

New Car Smell

Mmm, how beautiful?!

No dings, no scars,

no dents, with the smell

of a brand new car.

I can't wait to whip that,

even if it's just for the day,

even if it's just a test drive,

even if it's just for play.

How many miles does it have,

and how often should I wax it?

Very often I hope,

and I hope there's no plastic.

There's no need for any work,

she runs with no problems,

and if there is then I'm sure

that I can simply solve them.

It should be an easy fix

since she's not that old.

I can tell from the smell

...(sniff)... ah... sold...