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Take My Advice

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A lot has been taking

Just another girl barely in the making

Such a cold world in the winter worst weather

s selling drugs in order to make life better

Beat me

Kick me

But you won't take away my soul

Call me what you want but you can't call me nothing

I always took that and turned it into something

Rather its motivation or appreciation

Take this as a lesson , learn from it and you'll take it as a blessing

Rather then a curse I always had to go last never the one to go first

But my steps you'll have to take someday and maybe you'll look back and you'll even say

So this is how it feels to be put down

So this so how it feels to get kicked to the ground

And this is how it feels to be ashamed

People around me are the ones to be blamed

And you get sick of playing the pain game

If you know better , you'll do better

And you'll take that chance to leave

Or stay and get hurt it'll make your heart bleed

Just take my advice and just go live your life

Nothing is worse then being tortured by your own conscious

Listen to me what I'm saying is not any nonsense

Listen lil girl you have a lot to live for

Don't let those opportunities get up and walk out the Door

Just leave , go places , flashing lights

Theres so much to see

I bet you come back one day thanking me

You are good enough to be anything

Just cause your not a size zero or can't sing doesn't mean thing

You are still a human being

Yes baby doll I understand you been hurt

But you have to learn to pick yourself up and dust off the dirt

Because you deserve better then what you're giving yourself listen to me baby I know you ain't deaf

Go , leave then you'll see what your truly met to be

Then call me before it becomes to late

God ain't giving me all the time in the world to wait

Take My advice

I bet you end up somewhere

Happy and nice.

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DallasCowgirl says:

This was good! Thanks for sharing.

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