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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I always think of things that don’t make sense

Like I’m crazy that’s non sense

Can’t touch it without a glove

 

Too hot to handle it burns like scandal

Melted wax on the mantle

Blow out the candles

 

I’m crazy out the door

I had to change the locks once more

I got a gun get off my porch

 

Don’t stall head up the block

I’m about to knock your clock off the wall

So I can see what time it is

 

Is it really that late?

What time is dinner have I ate

Looking in the dishwasher for the plate

 

The food is cold in the microwave

I’m just sitting here turning page after page

So much weight on my back still not broke

 

Tried to give my life to God

He didn’t take it

It was real I didn’t fake it

 

I come correct no disrespect to all my christen folks

 

I give a shootout “YO” I just want to know

If I’m burning up down here

Why does hell have to follow?

 

I feel like I’m being swallowed like water from a bottle

Empty I’m hollow

Evil no hallow

 

Let me go I can’t tango

Does it look good it depends on the angle

What kind of fruit is mango?

I should be sleep but can’t go

 

I’m facing a wall just trying to get over that’s all

Broken mirrors how much worse can it get?

I can do seven years standing on my head

 

It’s late I need to go to bed

My stomach is growling

I’m still wondering have I been fed

 

I’m out of luck

When I don’t get up

Call me lazy

 

I need to change my mind

I’m thinking crazy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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tretre says:

Now I may be reading into this more then someone else would but I truly thought this was deep. " I give a shoutout "Yo" I just want to know, If I'm burning up down here, Why does hell have to follow" These lines to me were very deep. Always keep that pen movin Wize Dom!
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2b2b2 says:

Wize.....you be killin' 'em.....Jack Johnson type writez....POW!
 

sonofsun5211 says:

very......... stimulating....

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catmartan says:

Awesome Write! Deep!!!!!!!! Keep the pen pumping!

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