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Dumbfound

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romance

Looking for love

but instead dumb found

me now im stuck on stupid

looking so dumbfound

i didn't know

you didn't know

you can't know

what you won't

therefore

how can you know what you don't

please ease these breezes

for they leave trees leavless

uprooting deep roots

like cyclones of love

that cycle with hate

the cycle it's fate

ache is what it takes

to break us

too much on the plate

it saves us

our appetites ate us

and our own games played us

in an outrage

we outrage us

how outrageous

cold contagious

im down to pages

the only places

i can hide

the sun can shine

and dumb can't find me

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		tretre says: I like this poem. I enjoyed reading it. My favorite part was "Like cyclones of love that cycles with hate, the cycles it's fate, ache is what it takes to break us up. Loved that part. Beautiful work. Always keep that pen movin SonOfSun! poems by this commentor The Art Of Poetry: This Time: (Second Chances) My self image

OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY sonofsun5211

Superman

Stop

Wait

Let me put on my cape

I’m not

That great

I just said it for your sake

As I

Save you

You keep running toward wealth

But why

When I knew

You don’t care care about our health

Stressing

Over lessons

That I’ve already learned

And resting

On bridges

That should have long burned

But if I

Set it to flame

You wouldn’t be able to escape

And I’d fly

Home in shame

To go and get my cape

Mold

Mold me

Hold me

until i burn cold

until i turn old

Stow me away

smuggle me into your heart

or throw me away

if you just want to be a part

of a part of me

and not the whole

You can't make penicillin

from every mold...

Pieces

I'm no philosopher

but here is my thesis

you'll fall apart

and I'll pick up the pieces

time and time again

things get out of hand

and you fall into my arms

when you can hardly stand

carrying both our weight

withstanding both our pain

i am the rope that bounds

tethering our brains

to sanity when things

try to pull us from our roots

middle fingers to the world

with blood in our boots

but i am the strength

and i am the fort

and i am the shield

and i am the sword

but sometimes I'm defenseless

and i slip between the creases

and I'm puzzled to find

there's no one picking up the pieces....

Love Won't Let Me

Love is like the Autobahn,

it has no speed limit.

What else would you expect

when you're putting your all in it?

What else would you expect

when it's something you don't plan?

What else would you expect

when love hates its biggest fans?

See, I too love love,

but look where it gets me.

I would love to love you,

but love won't let me.

Dumbfound

Looking for love

but instead dumb found

me now im stuck on stupid

looking so dumbfound

i didn't know

you didn't know

you can't know

what you won't

therefore

how can you know what you don't

please ease these breezes

for they leave trees leavless

uprooting deep roots

like cyclones of love

that cycle with hate

the cycle it's fate

ache is what it takes

to break us

too much on the plate

it saves us

our appetites ate us

and our own games played us

in an outrage

we outrage us

how outrageous

cold contagious

im down to pages

the only places

i can hide

...

why you?...

when you're ok it's all right

but you've got it all wrong

you see it's not alright

to make my nights long

just because you're all good

doesn't make me okay

there can still be bad for me

even on your best days

and not to be selfish

or even self-centered

but you know if i'm doing bad

as soon as i enter

so do good by me

and i would stand by you

instead you make me hate love...

why you?

WHY ME?...

WHY DO YOU LOVE ME

I'M NOT THAT SPECIAL

BUT YOU FIGHT FOR ME

WHEN I HATE TO WRESTLE

YOU SEE ME DIFFERENT

MORE THAN I CAN SEE

MY PEDESTAL IS HIGH

YOU THINK I'M DEEP AS THE SEAS

YOU SAY MY POWER

IS TOO A FURTHER DEGREE

AND MAKES YOUR TEMPERATURE RISE

THOUGH I THINK I'M LOW KEY

BUT WHEN I'M WITH YOU

I'M AS HAPPY AS I CAN BE

I ONLY HAVE ONE QUESTION...

WHY ME?

Lovely

Love me

Love more

Loves lost

Love lore

Lovely

Lover

Love hearing

Love roar

Love you

Loving us

Love letting

Love soar

Love me

Lovely

Loves or

Love lore

Love Is A Weed

Love is a weed

That just pops up

For some it's slow

For me it's always abrupt

Quick to bud and multiply

For love is a vine

That will completely take over

If given the time

And it may shed it's leaves

But it has strong roots

For love is a tree

And it will still bare fruit

Though it can be cut down

And turned back to a seed

Watered by hate

For love is a weed

Dumbfound

Superman

Mold

Pieces

Love Won't Let Me

Dumbfound

why you?...

WHY ME?...

Lovely

Love Is A Weed

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