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sonofsun5211
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The Last of Us

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the last of us will be cold

strained from a life of strife

and death will come easy

after one's hard life

forced to devote it all

with no more left to give

way pass one's limits

a short life long lived

opening one's eyes

only to see the closer

hell will be close

and heaven even closer

grinding gears in one's motor

until they turn to dust

and the same things that killed the first

will kill the last of us

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The Immortal Wize says:

You came with it the only way, you could...killer flow.
 

Wordman21 says:

Nice flow, nice flow...
 

theyoungmc says:

BArs ,.

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2b2b2 says:

TIGHT

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