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I call me Rebound

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I call me rebound.

 

Void filler for the night.

 

Heart mender when I'm in your sight.

 

Answer from me is never might.

 

Company for your tears, mostly at night.

 

I'm defined as "rebound".

 

Body warmer, when your feelings are cold.

 

My feelings subconsciously suppressed, when you're feeling bold.

 

My actions clearly speak of a rebound.

 

Closed heart.

 

Will I be a "good missed opportunities", damaged goods?

 

I'm suppressed being.

 

Comfort, when you thought you'd get that early morning call.

 

Hand to hold when walking through malls.

 

They call me rebound.

 

I can only dream of standing tall.

 

Having what I deserve, like ever lasting love and all the cliches...like walking hand and hand through Lowes picking out colors for our plain white picket fenced walls.

 

Sad thing about it.

 

I've become immune to being.

 

Rebound.

 

Artificial kisses and generic hugs.

 

Just someone to surround, your less than warm bed.

 

Funny how I play part as your tissue.

 

My shoulders plays as your pillow, but you neglect to see "my human".

 

Easily forgetting that it's my heart where you try and lie your head.

 

I'm done being Rebound. If you don't get it, refer back to line 1 to reread what I've said.

 

M.T.F.D.

 

Rita S.

 

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Jay Beach says:

Nice write. I just love the words you use too. Very very nice
 

rare says:

Th:)nk you
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tretre says:

This poem is very deep. As I read this poem I could invision every word as though I was living this myself... Beautiful work...This is the type of poetry I love to read. I really like your work...Much love to you...Keep that pen movin Rare!

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2b2b2 says:

Fierce Capture.....well played rare....thanks for sharing!
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The Immortal Wize says:

WOW!!! The imagination behond this piece.

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rare says:

Thank you all for the love..I love being able to be honest with my feelings, putting them into compositions and be praised for my work... Jah Bless
 

DallasCowgirl says:

Nice write!

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