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Oceanic Breeze

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Geez it feels good

feelin this oceanic breeze

Such a beautiful morning

feeling that breeze circulating

through the trees

Sky of light blue

scattered clouds hangin

out too

The sun is shinning but not

all that sweaty sultry heat

Gonna sit outside enjoy to

the fullest this oceanic treat

Put my Bose speakers out get

into some old school

while relaxin in this natural

nature makin cool

Refreshen cold Bud Light

on ice

Take a few tokes this

oceanic breeze taint no joke

Man this cool morning

is nice

 

 

 

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tretre says:

This poem made me feel relaxed just reading it. I love it.. I love poetry that can just make you feel like your in a different place and time. Beautiful work MrMelody!!! Always keep that pen movin!!!
 

scash102 says:

Lovin the vibe from this chill poem. Great write!

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much Mz tretre. livin in the moment that be me, rare day without all that humidity, a kick back from hurricane Arthur
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you MZ scash102,,had to smile happy when you said this chill poem, because that's exactly what the situation was
 

Cjsmom says:

Cant wait until winter is over so I can sit on my porch, drink my wine and read a book while rocking in the breeze....OMG!
 

mrmelody7 says:

Oh yeah those days are like the song easy by the Commodores easy like sunday morning that particular day the birds were even hangin out jammin with me

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