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lightness in the dark
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how far down is deep

is it beyond touching

the floor of the sea

 

how high is the sky

how close if magnified

 

how strong is power

could it generate enough energy

to start a nuclear shower

 

obscure intelligents

what may seem dubiously doubtful

and sometimes downright debatable

things that we wish were bio degradable

 

things that we may find questionable

impossible and unthinkable

perplexing, baffling and ambiguous

can prove to be legible

 

shame the nameless

break the seal with applied pressure

torch with flames burning out of control

inextinguishable any battle is beatable

nothing stands unbelievable

 

things that are mesmerizing and incredible

what's unstoppable it's  probable

not unbelievable or unimaginable

no one is invincible

 

muddy water politics

confuse, complicate and obfuscate

 

why does heaven need a gate

what is needed to negate or deflect

 

should I be apposed

am I correct

 

am I supposed to rise to the occasion

and be surprised to

find the way blocked

a shotgun ed

 

and a mansion that has no room

 

obviously

 

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Intheshadowz says:

Nicely put . Good job

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2b2b2 says:

BEAUTIFUL CAPTURE.....ONE
 

catmartan says:

Awesome yes indeed !

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Te'ArraPoetry says:

Powerful poem gives me chills.

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