Beautifl_Black_Rose | Poetry Vibe
Beautifl_Black_Rose
This poet practices good karma and posts comments 400

Site Rank

ROOKIE

  colonel
Total poems   5
Lifetime Views   1167
Total poems - 7 days   0
Total poems - 30 days   0
Total poems - 90 days   0
Total poems - 365 days   0
you need to login or register to leave a comment

losing life (free write)

CATEGORY

just different

Views: 197

The more i try and forget the more i remember the pain that struck with the words that you released that crushed me with one blow....

when things start going wrong you for a room to run in or a way to turn..... messing up all u can in the path you make sure your sure thing was still attached so you would lose life....

screw her over tell her everything knowing its her first time at love ..... you got her

once you others started to fall back then you want to be that man but not realizing that the person that was your sure thing has lost life for you and now you want to be that person and the tables have turned

 

now your the one losing life

You must be registered to leave a comment. Registration is FREE.

Register

COMMENTS

Contest Winner  

2b2b2 says:

Poignant pen...thanks for sharing...ONE

login below

Forgot your username?